Could use some feedback on what might work best for the poster
Thanks
Be the difference
Be a dad
Be there
Be a dad
They need you to be a Dad
Just be there
We will do the rest
The laws won’t change unless your there
Be a dad
The first battle is being there
Be a Dad
Only you can be a Dad
You’re the only father he will ever have
Don’t give up the fight
Be there
Stay tough Dad
He is counting on you
Without you
We all lose
There is no hiding
From being a Dad
Persistence Wins Dad
Winners never quit
Dad
Dad aka Hero
Be there
Superhero wanted
Dad
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I think you have a lot of good options to choose from here depending on what direction you want to take. I think 'Be the Difference. Be a Dad.' would be a strong tagline. Then your headlines could use either the 'Dad aka Hero' or 'Superhero wanted concepts.' That way you could come up with three different ideas. Dad aka (fill in the blank). As an alternative tagline, you could use 'The laws won't change unless you're there. Be a Dad' if you want to bring the focus to the idea of changing the legal environment. Hope that helps. Nice work!
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ReplyDeleteI think you're off to a good start. I would avoid using the word HE though. It kind of nixes fathers who have daughters. I agree with Sarah. That tagline hits home and doesn't have any fluff with it. You could also do "Be involved. Be a dad." But "difference" carries a much stronger image than "involved."
ReplyDeleteI agree with Meg's Comment... Be Involved...Be a DAD.
ReplyDeleteI like the idea of doing the Dad a.k.a. ... Another way to use one of your examples is "Just be there. That's all they want." Instead of "We'll do the rest." Although that also depends on what the direction of the poster is. If it's a message about the group itself, then your way works. But if it's just a message to reach fathers that is sponsored by the group, it's different.
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